五律·对雨怀思
April 29, 2008 7 Comments
前几天纽约一直在下雨。一时写了首五律。都说五言律诗最难写，果不其然。中间两个对子对得还不是太好。先放在这儿：
帘幕接天雨
淅淅透客襟
云飘一乡水
寥落异邦霖
欲向东江汇
犹思故土寻
颠簸几万里
为醉旧花阴
注：东江，纽约的East River
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Tides - 望海潮 
挺能写，呵呵
我看对的蛮好的嘛。。。:-p
jumpy~~
5.1快乐~~~
拙见：犹思故土寻。貌似与寻相对还是向字好些，可惜你前句用了。呵呵忙得好久没看大叔的诗了。以后补上我的家庭作业。
拙见：犹思故土寻。貌似与寻相对还是向字好些，可惜你前句用了。呵呵忙得好久没看大叔的诗了。以后补上我的家庭作业。
有点谐音啊…